This is the second edition of my portfolio that I put together over easter break, using the last project that Carl and I worked on together. I really am pleased with how that one turned out. Anyway, yes, I'm much more pleased with Portfolio 2.0 than I was with the first one. I sent this one to about five people altogether and got two responses.
One from Lee at B&W Studio:
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Hi Hana - I would start by maybe not designing yourself a logo! or if youdo, make sure it's simple... OR THE BEST thing ever.I think here at B&W Studio we are really keen on good typography - this kindof didn't reflect that.I think the work should present the presentation and not the logo BIG on thefirst page - maybe some really nice typography... 2 logo's also andrepeating yourself.I also feel there is too much per page, and you come to the end veryquickly... thankyou for your time...! not too sure it took long enough.Seperate the work a little and make a story from it. If there is anythingyou are not quite sure about - take it out.I'd expect a little more also.Over designed typo at the bottom, and not enough space. I like runningheaders explain stuff - but does it have to be 12pt text?WORK IS GOOD - and I can see some really good potential here...Think about this as been you very most important project.I reckon you should look through plenty of Creative Reviews / Design Weeks /Grafik magazines - this is where you will find other companies. It's reallykey that you do the research... as you've done with us.HOPE THIS HELPS - cheers Lee "
Which was really helpful, a nice long emailing with really good feedback, this is exactly what I wanted. I see what he means about the logo and think I'm definitely going to rejig this again, maybe spread it out a bit more. I am still planning on doing a load of work in the summer to pad this out too.
Another came from Sam at Aloof Design:
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Hi Hana,Thank you for your email- flattered you like our work.In response to your question, I think you need to get much more work into your portfolio to give people a really good idea of the breadth of your ideas/ skills/ interests, and show some of the thinking/ concept work behind the final result.Hope that's useful.All the best,SamCreative Director "
Short, but appreciated. It's all well and good telling me that I need to put more work in there, but the whole point of this exercise was to create a 'mini' portfolio, five pieces of work max.
Either way, I'll take all of this on board.
-HJ x